What do you think of my lyrics? (upbeat tempo)?

(slow paced) All right, its ya boy Ciandre back in ya face....


Got my homeboy cooli in the place


Kick back, lemme tell you about this...





(faster)California lifestyle that I live,


Duece afta more, high as a kid,


whoopas on the street straight slammin,


Striking through the neighborhood jammin,


I can float the pain, smoke the dank, hit the intersection an do some thangs,


passin up freaks with a gang of yo%26#039;s, smooth thick legs, no panty hose.


silky perms and doo-doo brains, brotha%26#039;s with curls some with bangs,


house parties rock, way past three,


brothas straight sippin on hennesey,


High speed chases, chevy races, havin sex in the strangest place,


Nike shoes, levi jeans, triple gold things, and straight lacings.


Neva on time, always late, on the bay bridge or the golden gate,


if you wanna live on the best coast, you betta try to move to the west coast,


wake up in the morning,eat some grits,hit the studio make some hits, one million copies or even more,


pumpin dope ryhmes in the record sto

What do you think of my lyrics? (upbeat tempo)?
LOL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You suck. No wonder your woman cheats.
Reply:you%26#039;ve gota be kidding. you think those are lyrics??





omg. *laughs*





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